We laughed to remember our dorm or first apartment,
the kitchen, pinched, the bath with three doors,
the underground windows, the tilted floors,
the gulf between our pitiful pasts and present.But I heard wistfulness and wonderment,
why Solomon made his splendid temple
hark back to the tabernacle,
when God felt near as fire in a nomad's tent.
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My friends in Education for Ministry (EfM) gave me this idea with their stories and the insight about the tabernacle. See our class blog.
In the 12 waking hours since I posted this yesterday, I've revised the last five lines at least 25 ways. The pace accelerated when I read some criticism of careless meter in an essay by Dana Gioia. Once again, I find that cutting awkward phrases made room for new ones that said more of what I'd wanted to say. - WSS
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